A way to break bones? The weight of intuitiveness – Review
This is an informative report of detailed and thorough actualistic research. The larger research context is topical and timely, given the current interest in complex behaviours inferred from Middle Palaeolithic assemblages. Such experiments are never simple to organise and can usually be criticised for having too little replication of experimenter, material and procedure. However, this team developed a good pragmatic compromise between replication and practicability: it would be foolish to require hundreds of volunteers smashing many thousands of bones even if that did increase statistical rigour. The working methods are described clearly, with enough detail to allow the work to be repeated but without making the text longer than necessary. Similarly, the results are set out well and are properly separated from the discussion of those results and inferences drawn from them. The conclusions are, to be honest, not surprising. If asked, I would have expected the morphology of the bone to be a strong predictor of the pattern of pits and fractures, and that different people would tackle the task in quite different and probably inconsistent ways. However, that would have been informed speculation, at best, whereas this paper presents firm supporting evidence. The conclusion regarding counter-blows is particularly important, and often neglected in studies of ancient material. The last paragraph could, perhaps, have said more about the experimental procedure and how it might be refined or modified in any future research?
In all, I enjoyed reading this paper and learned from it. Below, I have a few comments on particular details.
Abstract: This needs to be more concise, and I strongly recommend that the authors edit the Abstract with the support of a first-language English speaker to ensure that the text says exactly what they intend. As it stands, I am not sure that this is the case. NB this applies to the Abstract, not to the paper as a whole.
133-4: why give the standard deviation of the volunteer’s ages? Is there any reason to think that they would be approximately normally distributed? “Eight men aged xx to yy” would be enough?
Methods statement: good. This is thorough and detailed without including tangentially relevant material. It would enable another researcher to repeat the process with confidence.
216-236: nice account of the stats analysis, and sensible to have used Fisher’s exact test.
241-255: although this is interesting and perhaps unsurprising, all of the volunteers came from a culture with chairs and other forms of seating. It is questionable, therefore, whether these results can be used to propose or compare positional behaviour in any non-chair group such as Neanderthals.
312-325: I realise that this would have been difficult to parameterise! There is a difference between a task that is ‘hard’ because it is difficult to undertake and one that is ‘hard’ because it requires a lot of physical effort. For example, lace-making is ‘hard’ because it is complex and requires intricate hand movements, but not ‘hard’ because it is tiring or requires strength. Chopping logs is the reverse. Does the scale of difficulty used here integrate those two rather different forms of ‘easy/hard’, or is it one more than the other?
340-346: that’s really interesting.
383-6 and 418-23: does this indicate a significant degree of inter-observer variation in the recording? If so, this needs to be said more explicitly.
Figure 3: that’s good. Not only the PCA plot, but indication of which variables were loading which dimensions of the plot.
444-6: check the caption to Fig 5. The labelling does not match the figure.
484-6: caption to Fig 9 is quite difficult to understand. Can this be improved by labelling specimens within the fig? Same for Fig 11.
538-9: how did experimenters ‘clean’ their hands? I would expect them to rub their hands with dust/dirt to congeal and remove fat plus sweat. Maybe that’s just me.
In this important paper, Vettese and colleagues argue that there is an intuitive way to break a bone in order to obtain its marrow. They employ unexperienced people to break the bones. Then, by applying GIS method to identify percussion mark concentrations, they point to the existence of bone morphology constraints and thus to an intuitive way to break the bones. The manuscript is very interesting and the fundamentals of the work – i.e. the experiment execution and the taphonomic and GIS analyses – are of high quality. The methods and data presentation are mostly detailed and the conclusions are justified by the data. I recommend publication if two main issues are taken care of:
1) The paper is not clearly written and thus, very difficult to follow. I strongly recommend subjecting the text to professional language editing.
2) Every figure and table (including supplementary) must be independently understandable and the legend should include a title, clear explanation, abbreviations and reference to the source of the data.
In addition, I have several suggestions and points to fix, detailed below.
Terminology – use of terms interchangeably (e.g., Individual - experimenter - volunteer). Please be consistent.
Figures 4–13 – n blows is needed at least for every bone if not in all elements.
Figures 4–5 – it is impossible to differentiate between the shapes and colors.
Figures 6–13 – 8 figures is way too much, at least half should removed to the supplementary.
Experimenter interviews – are missing, you could obtain a lot of supporting data (e.g. why did you hit/hold/use anvil etc.). Why didn’t you ask those questions? If you did, please add the information where needed or add questionnaires to supplementary.
SI – references to SI are unclear (e.g. 286 "Supplementary Information 1, 2, 3 and 4") is it table or figure 1? And be more precise, you can’t refer to 4 figures). Some figures referenced in the text are missing (358–359 Supplementary Information 6).
Too long (500 words)
35–36 – "Indeed, a previous study was able to show the possible existence of intuitive patterns of distribution of these traces according to the elements" – then I expect an explanation what have you added on it.
43 – what is innovative in the method?
72–75 - wasn’t noted before 2012?
79 – after 1992 - ) missing
101–102 – "The definition of a butchery tradition is a systematic and counterintuitive pattern shared by a same group" – First, add reference or detailed explanation. Second, why must a tradition be counterintuitive? If a group applies systematic and intuitive patterns for generations, you will not define it as tradition?
106–107 – ditto.
Material and Methods
When and where were the experiment carried out?
Is it a different experiment then the one reported in Stavrova et al. 2019?
145 – Shouldn’t the protocol be a part of this paper? Why put it separately?
153 – size = height?
162 - of each experimenter or each bone?
183–186 what is the difference from Marean and Spencer 1991? Why reinvent the wheel? If not it, why not following other known methods which compatible to other research? (e.g. Dobney and Rielly 1988; Lam et al 1999 ect.) and if using new one, why not following Saladié et al 2011 which have done the same based Pales?
Moreover, Castel and Grunwald are missing in the bibliography and anyhow referencing a private website is unacceptable.
241 – Figure with photos will be very helpful. Consider adding videos like Camaros et al 2013 for example.
Camaros, E., Cueto, M., Teira, L.C., Tapia, J., Cubas, M., Blasco, R., Rosell, J., Rivals, F., 2013. Large carnivores as taphonomic agents of space modification: an experimental approach with archaeological implications. Journal of Archaeological Science 40, 1361-1368 https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jas.2012.09.037
256–260 – may be partly belong to the discussion? clarify
276 – général - change to English
280–281 - isn’t it expected since it contains the lowest amount? Shouldn’t it be the amount of the possible marrow to extract? See line 349 below too.
286 – too general.
289 – what is the title of this table?
300–301 – discussion?
316 – beginning In summary?
320–322 – discussion.
323 – how do you infer it out of table 5?
341 – percentage or numerical? Consistency.
349 – You calculate efficiency by blows to marrow weight, but since each bone type (i.e. femur, radius) contains a different amount of marrow to begin with, your index should be normalized by bone marrow content.
357–358 "the Wicoxon signed rank test did not show a significant difference between the first five and the last five tries or between the first three and the last three tries."
There was no significant difference between the first five and the last five tries or between the first three and the last three tries (Wicoxon signed rank test; p<0.05).
358 – SI table or figure? Anyhow it is missing.
366 - add number of other elements
370 – SI figure 4, should rotate the figure properly.
375 - SI 7 missing
Bone fragmentation – I miss fragment length which is a very common index in Paleolithic archology.
434–436 why did you separate the different PM?
453 – omit parentheses
455–456 you can make it easier for the reader and refer to figure 6c.
It is improper adding new information that was not mention in the results –
526–528; Some volunteers applied reduced force when they hit the bones, especially during the first attempts.
536–539; it is important to note that sometimes the hammerstone slipped on the cortical surface or slipped out of the experimenter’s hand. This happened especially when the hammerstone and hands were covered in grease after several tries. When an individual broke several bones, he/she had to clean the tools or his/her hands to pursue marrow extraction.
566 - it is the assumption of the observer or they actually said it?
Consistency - choose your preferred bibliographic style and follow it
e.g. Is it ordered later-earlier or the opposite? See Binford 1981, 1978 but Costamagno 1999, 2009, 2014. While Blasco 2014, 2012, 2013?!
Castel appear twice.
Stavrova et al 2019 is missing.
922 – Vettese – different font.